I knew you slid a poem between those lines to rational goodness. You shouldn't have formatted the thing, it flowed oddly well into that lyric poetry I can't quite understand but feel the beat to. Might think about capping off the stanza? It ends on nothing final. PS: Don't give me bullshit on how the absence of finality at the end of the poem was deliberate blah blah, want to experiment with soft touch blah blah.

stand by redesigning my _language_