Uh, subconscious pretentiousness/poshness isn't all too interesting... Well five hands kind of gives him an edge over the other monkeys, elevating him but rejecting him from monkeydom. No, it perfectly betrays the spirit I feel inherent in your writing, you are not being true to yourself, hence, no, it is not what I want at all. Scrap, redo. I suppose I felt affinity to the five-handed monkey because I just whipped it up in my head, but he's the guy going to be drawing the thing. It is helpful to know what you think.